Kia ora bloggers this is a piece ofΒ  my writing

I was struggling with this piece of writing because I didn’t have an idea.

Task 1

These sentences are sick and need your help to feel better. Write in past tense.

Grandma held her cane. She walked towards the railway tracks. She was tired.
Grandma held her cane as tight as a nail in a piece of wood . Britfuly, she walked towards the roller coaster tracks with a burnt out cart on it. Slowly, she got worn out.


Kia ora bloggers it’s OLIVER here

I think that he’s proud because he thinks he’s actually worth somethingΒ  and not just a nobody .

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Oliver

 


Kia ora blogger it oliver here
I would rather be the strongest because then I could carry out items of holes
What would you rather?
Oliver


Kia ora blogger it’s oliver here
I would rather see my great great great grandchildren because there would be much more to do and they might live in space.
What would you do in my passion?
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Oliver


Kia ora blogger it’s oliver here
I think that should be left in the wild because then he can see his own kind again.
What do you think?